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Love and Marriage in Da Nang (Haiku) by Tascobar Boom Boom, Five Dollar
Sucky Sucky, Two Dollar
Me love you LONG time.
Up the ladder:
it's slow time
Down the ladder:
why?
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 4.1666665
Posted: August 27, 2002 9:21 AM PDT; Last modified: August 27, 2002 9:21 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.3907847 Overall Rank: 13006 Comments:
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27-Aug-02/3:58 PM
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Defines new parameters for poetry in the post 9-11 world.
Repetetive and predictable. 5 dolla no holla. Shit this joke is probably older then you.0
it could be argued that sucky is one syllabel and one. you fail. nice sensuals though and an interesting title. 7/10! mojave.confound.avuncular.babble.o
peter porcupine is a bored house wife with a cock and balls midrift stare. he's a cad and a deep throat who wets his bed out of self respect and chivalry. that's why i respect his opinion like floored toast. bon appetite piker. look down! see that? that's my 'hoof' mocking at you. don't make me fill you full of kale. you couldn't handle the flavorless calcium blast. you are a muted clank.missed.s
More incisive poetry Tascobar. However, I regretfully feel that you have taken inspiration from others with this piece, and so can only award a 4. Nice try, buddy.
THIS IS DRIBBLE!!!
Well, I like it, even though Joseph Heller got there first.
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