poemranker ::Love and Marriage in Da Nang by Tascobar

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Love and Marriage in Da Nang

by Tascobar

Member since 2002 · Posted 27 Aug 2002 · 7 comments

Boom Boom, Five Dollar Sucky Sucky, Two Dollar Me love you LONG time.

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7 comments

[10] deleted user 27-Aug-02/3:58 PM Reply
Defines new parameters for poetry in the post 9-11 world.
[0] god'swife 27-Aug-02/4:14 PM Reply
Repetetive and predictable. 5 dolla no holla. Shit this joke is probably older then you.0
[7] horus8 27-Aug-02/4:24 PM Reply
it could be argued that sucky is one syllabel and one. you fail. nice sensuals though and an interesting title. 7/10! mojave.confound.avuncular.babble.o
[7] horus8 27-Aug-02/4:31 PM Reply
peter porcupine is a bored house wife with a cock and balls midrift stare. he's a cad and a deep throat who wets his bed out of self respect and chivalry. that's why i respect his opinion like floored toast. bon appetite piker. look down! see that? that's my 'hoof' mocking at you. don't make me fill you full of kale. you couldn't handle the flavorless calcium blast. you are a muted clank.missed.s
[4] Tarquin De La Bog 28-Aug-02/10:10 AM Reply
More incisive poetry Tascobar. However, I regretfully feel that you have taken inspiration from others with this piece, and so can only award a 4. Nice try, buddy.
[0] Ming T. Merciless 29-Aug-02/7:33 AM Reply
THIS IS DRIBBLE!!!
[8] Christof 23-Sep-02/4:13 AM Reply
Well, I like it, even though Joseph Heller got there first.