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Love and Marriage in Da Nang (Haiku) by Tascobar

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Tarquin De La Bog 28-Aug-02/10:10 AM
More incisive poetry Tascobar. However, I regretfully feel that you have taken inspiration from others with this piece, and so can only award a 4. Nice try, buddy.




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