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Free verse № 1509

it's slow time

by silvertongueddevil

Member since 2002 · Posted 11 May 2002 · 4 comments

it's slow time flatline for that other heart, not the pump, but the pilot. not the pilot, the navigator. not the navigator, the cartographer. not the cartographer, the surveyor. not the surveyor, the explorer. not the explorer, the dreamer, that other heart.

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[7] deleted user 14-May-02/9:51 AM Reply
other heart/same heart...... you found the root there's a dreamer in each of them... they are that thing and the dreamer, too. nice...although I don't really get your language in the first 2 lines: creativity does cycle in and out...yes. but, does it altogether flatline? maybe another metaphor? something circular... or resting... maybe the landscape?
[6] tiamat 3-Aug-02/7:10 PM Reply
very nice.
[7] little_big_nose 10-Jan-04/6:14 PM Reply
confusing as hell
[n/a] horus8 › little_big_nose 10-Jan-04/6:45 PM Reply
Why? because you're fucking stupid?