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Love and Marriage in Da Nang (Haiku) by Tascobar

Boom Boom, Five Dollar Sucky Sucky, Two Dollar Me love you LONG time.

horus8 27-Aug-02/4:24 PM
it could be argued that sucky is one syllabel and one. you fail. nice sensuals though and an interesting title. 7/10! mojave.confound.avuncular.babble.o




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