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18 (Haiku) by mikejedw
Between city blocks Cold air is a crystal cross-- Winter in the streets.
Up the ladder: cool hand luke
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Weighted score: 5.3585887
Overall Rank: 3297
Posted: January 12, 2003 3:33 PM PST; Last modified: January 12, 2003 3:33 PM PST
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[7] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.113.154 | 12-Jan-03/3:39 PM | Reply
Outside forest Elms
Hot soup is a better friend--
Summer on a spoon.
[n/a] mikejedw @ 66.47.86.4 > Jeremi B. Handrinos | 12-Jan-03/4:03 PM | Reply
The letters in my bowl sink--
Winter's sly typography.

(renga time! http://www.ahapoetry.com/rengfmwi.htm)
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 | 13-Jan-03/12:31 AM | Reply
Shuffling hobos
Mumble incoherently--
Perhaps they're zombies.
[n/a] mikejedw @ 66.47.86.4 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 13-Jan-03/12:40 AM | Reply
No mere mortal can resist
The evil of... The Thriller
[n/a] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 13-Jan-03/2:52 AM | Reply
no, cnn interns.
[9] hipster flare @ 209.68.66.47 | 13-Jan-03/9:43 AM | Reply
chilly. very nicely done!
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