| Re: alone baby by famenglory |
21-Jan-03/8:04 PM |
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pure uranium, i here a ha singing take on me.
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| Re: Dr. Skellington by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
20-Jan-03/1:08 PM |
"Who rang not the reception bellington.
The dead see him for aches and swellingtons.
With gnawed-off limbs instead of cash they pay;
More use for flesh than gold has Skellington.
And though he causes screams and yellingtons,
You get a lollipop for being brave!
Or possibly some caramellington!!"
you're right, except it's 76.8% vilanelle. which still cuts wood in my hood.
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| Re: a comment on Mooseknuckle MacFoofingtons by Bachus |
20-Jan-03/1:02 PM |
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Ahhh..you lied..'twas a sonnet> Nicholas Jones taught you how, now look at you. bitch.
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| Re: ocean mistake by Gordiansknot |
19-Jan-03/9:31 PM |
To prove i am here for the poetry. only.
Des, in all honesty, you're much better at spending money then writing poetry, but i'm sure you knew that, and it's no water of your back.
Even Muti's poetry is scorching better than this husk exoskeletoned denial.
I could edit it for you.
that is if you'd like.
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| Re: Disgusting Stickmen by Bobjim |
17-Jan-03/6:48 PM |
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the best yet. it hardly palliates your condition though. here's a SWAGGER AWARD! ON THIS FINE DAY..OTAY!p
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| Re: My fiend by Bobjim |
17-Jan-03/6:43 PM |
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| Re: Bumper plagurising pack by Bobjim the II |
17-Jan-03/6:40 PM |
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a tiresome journey that i've taking many times before. idolator.
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| Re: Crystals In the snow by feathers68 |
17-Jan-03/6:33 PM |
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| Re: THe Missing Piece by redtearsc |
16-Jan-03/5:41 PM |
Couple typos here and there.
Odd way of sounding (the poem out).
Structure's sort of wobbly still.
Did you choose the simplicity of your words purposely?
Because it takes away from the sentiment i believe.
Therefore, you might option to re- edit this piece with a bigger dictionary if you catch my meaning.
overall though, not bad
I can relate to the situation.
And hopefully your honesty
That is unless it was all bullshit, but i doubt that..have a 6.
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| Re: Contrasts by Quarton |
16-Jan-03/5:35 PM |
Passive, yet candidly gorgeous.
Yes, enjoy the silence.
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| Re: killer boredom butterfly (psychedelic) by nentwined |
16-Jan-03/5:27 PM |
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this is totally bitchin bros, fuckin aye.<the warlock blast through a set of blistering songs on stage> tommy chong looks over at us above his left shoulder, or ws it right? any way...no matter because he says "you just ate thee most acid that i've ever seen anyone eat, man..uhhuhuh ha"..i like theee vilanelles. thanks.
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| Re: a comment on <{Grasping^Grendals}> by Bachus |
16-Jan-03/12:49 PM |
yeah, i read that before beowulf, and it realy changed my life.
I always suggest to friends now, that they should also read those two books in that order. I cannot say enough about that book actually..it's why i couldn't go to graduation. Library overdue fees.
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| Re: Welsh Landscape Part One by Nicholas Jones |
16-Jan-03/12:25 AM |
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Shit...i've seen places like that...umm, not, granted with unpronounce-able mames, but similiar..this poem had me on the edge of my seat, and yes, nick you've always been my secret facination here at the ranker..i just felt a bit..stupid around you, because obviously..i've never been able to go to school..i love your poetry..your culture, and your people..they are ancient warriors and extremely gifted, and i feel privilaged to have spent this time with you this evening thank you and good night.
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| Re: Days of November When It Never Get Light by Nicholas Jones |
16-Jan-03/12:18 AM |
how many people alive currently between the ages of 10 and 50 know what the word soporific means? No really...stop laughing i'm serious.
<nick and bachus throw their drinks back and share a moment>
God..it's times like these..you know?
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| Re: The Rebel by Nicholas Jones |
16-Jan-03/12:15 AM |
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Now that's humour. bravo...If you could have three wishes what would they be in reverse?
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| Re: Goodbye by Nicholas Jones |
16-Jan-03/12:13 AM |
<Bachus light a clove and pours them both some scotch>
So, Nick, who do you enjoy reading on poemranker, and what's up with the whole dark angel introspective?
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| Re: A Hancock Fanatic Writes by Nicholas Jones |
16-Jan-03/12:08 AM |
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you think that's pretty clever don't you boy...flying along on your motorcycle...oh sorry..i broke another mirror.....DON'T LEAVE ME HIGH, DON'T LEAVE ME DRY. <Bachus is nodding off to high and dry, nick smacks him awake saying...you just don't get it do you bong boy! yeah..i guess i don't nick. but you know what...it's the best thing that you ever had...the best thing that you had has gone away.....so don't fucking leave me high don't leave me dry...because, i wouldn't do that to you, as you can see..i'm ears wide open, but my flippant nature is too pheromonic? nay man..look to your left...see that flourescent pink life jacket? that's me treading these fourty foot swells also..nice poem.
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| Re: School (a sonnet) by Nicholas Jones |
15-Jan-03/11:58 PM |
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As a silly american i can't help but get a strong david gilmour roger waters vibe here...beautiful...Nick what's your special month and thing to do on your birth day, and is there any one in particular you spend your time with?
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| Re: Evensong by Nicholas Jones |
15-Jan-03/11:54 PM |
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fuck that was wild! woahhhh! <as fake plastic trees comes on> Nick, how old were you when you felt your first pulling towards the inevitable depravity of the written word? how old are you now? what's your sign, and how is your relationship with your parents?
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| Re: Expeditions by Nicholas Jones |
15-Jan-03/11:49 PM |
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Who are your favourite poets and musicians? 5 0f each please...have you ever been to iceland? It's weird how they dig american country aye? by the way..this poem was incredible, and i love your work.
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