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Contrasts (Free verse) by Quarton
Season's first snowfall, clamor like winter's past, traffic jams; horns blaring; snow blowers revving and shovels scraping. Muttered curses muffled by city noises; harsh neon lights. Deep in the woods, a sparkling white carpet; sunlight streaming; painted tree branches silhouetted against crystsalline skies. In a clearing, spring born fox frolicking; nose buried playfully in just discovered snow. Excuse the silence.

Up the ladder: Mystery
Down the ladder: Surreal

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.5
Weighted score: 5.1788044
Overall Rank: 4860
Posted: January 16, 2003 5:24 PM PST; Last modified: January 16, 2003 5:24 PM PST
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[9] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 16-Jan-03/5:35 PM | Reply
Passive, yet candidly gorgeous.
Yes, enjoy the silence.
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