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Free verse № 36799

Crystals In the snow

by feathers68

Member since 2002 · Posted 17 Jan 2003 · Edited 18 Jan 2003 · 3 comments

There is a sparkling shimmering light, that flickers in the snow, Tiny little diamonds glisten in the morning light. Maybe they were put there to shine upon our lives, to remind us of the beauty resting at our feet. Like Crystals in the snow, or maybe they are flecks of angels wings!

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[9] ChunkyHunkyMonkey 17-Jan-03/5:01 PM Reply
thats really good i like this i really do
[6] Bachus 17-Jan-03/6:33 PM Reply
diamond typo.
[6] nentwined 19-Jan-03/3:58 AM Reply
huh. I like.... the syllabic flow. it seems perfect. but I'd like a tad more rhyme, a hint other than the chopping of lines, the addition of commas where they wouldn't belong in prose, and use of imagery that this is poetry.

the statement/thought is cute, though.