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No future (Free verse) by Freethinker1602
It's your touch that I dream of
The want for it drives me mad
I crave for your tounge on my neck
I hunger for our lips to be one
Oh why does fate taunt me so
Your touch is with held
From my skin in the presence
Of a friend or an adult
And though I know the
Reason behind it all
I still long to act in a
Most foolish way just to have
Your hand in mine
You say the fox can be caught
However time and again it will not
I'd loved every second to know
That you could hear my heart
I lusted for things that I knew
Might one day happen
And now I wish I never knew
What it was to hunger
You said what I didn't know was there
Now there is no chance that I desire
Leave me alone wretched being
You could have gone on a totally different path
And yet the only thing I have to thank you for
Is the truth
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7851
Posted: January 16, 2003 6:27 PM PST; Last modified: July 25, 2003 11:56 PM PDT
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I had written the last 8 lines in anger. The ass I wrote this about never realized that this is how it'd been for a while. I'd wanted no future with him.
Obviously, I didn't fail to read the poeme. Obviously, you know I didn't fail to read the poeme. That is a silly sort of reply.