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No future (Free verse) by Freethinker1602

It's your touch that I dream of The want for it drives me mad I crave for your tounge on my neck I hunger for our lips to be one Oh why does fate taunt me so Your touch is with held From my skin in the presence Of a friend or an adult And though I know the Reason behind it all I still long to act in a Most foolish way just to have Your hand in mine You say the fox can be caught However time and again it will not I'd loved every second to know That you could hear my heart I lusted for things that I knew Might one day happen And now I wish I never knew What it was to hunger You said what I didn't know was there Now there is no chance that I desire Leave me alone wretched being You could have gone on a totally different path And yet the only thing I have to thank you for Is the truth

Bachus 26-Feb-03/1:44 PM
This is a bit more arc'd and much better then the other two, actually. that 's why i gave it a six.




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