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Days of November When It Never Get Light (Free verse) by Nicholas Jones
Rain hits my slanted window And I awake; the house makes sounds To thwart my dream of sleep, And even the World Service Fails in its soporific task. I tuck my blankets in well Because I am afraid of falling out And only flimsy bannisters Separate me from the stairs That lead down from my attic room.

Up the ladder: Wenches Wail
Down the ladder: en el tiempo que era nina

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.4
Weighted score: 5.0476813
Overall Rank: 6834
Posted: November 20, 2002 1:51 AM PST; Last modified: November 20, 2002 1:59 AM PST
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[4] god'swife @ 209.178.176.169 | 20-Nov-02/8:50 AM | Reply
Your title has a typo. the mood never builds.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 | 20-Nov-02/1:22 PM | Reply
Think. Feel.

Explore.
[9] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 16-Jan-03/12:18 AM | Reply
how many people alive currently between the ages of 10 and 50 know what the word soporific means? No really...stop laughing i'm serious.
<nick and bachus throw their drinks back and share a moment>
God..it's times like these..you know?
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