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killer boredom butterfly (psychedelic) (Villanelle) by nentwined there really wasn't much to do that day
purple humpback whale spore
my mind a butterfly, it fluttered away
daisies and petunias entered the fray
sad they'd voted for war
there really wasn't much to do that day
killer butterflies hunting the sway
but the sway was too poor
my mind a butterfly, it fluttered away
ants were marching in careful array
speaking haze a grey boar
there really wasn't much to do that day
some jabber awoke and started to pray
pins to pierce and chlorofor-
my mind a butterfly, it fluttered away
a whale of petunias, a story they say
story of pain and gore
there really wasn't much to do that day
my mind a butterfly, it fluttered away.
Up the ladder:
Dancing on Glass
Down the ladder:
Into My World
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Posted: December 17, 2002 7:06 AM PST; Last modified: December 17, 2002 7:06 AM PSTWeighted score: 6.9749103 Overall Rank: 114 The following users have marked this poem on their favorites list:
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17-Dec-02/8:19 AM
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yeee-haw!
Reminds me of my dear ol' blue butterfly ^___^
reminds me of crap. just kidding, its good. butteflies.....
Fabulous! Psychedelic Butterflies will remember this in one of our songs!!!! Wheeee!!!!! Heeheeheehee!
I like this so much it may have a ten! Foom!!
thanks. :) it was... definitely lack-of-sleep inspired.
this is totally bitchin bros, fuckin aye.<the warlock blast through a set of blistering songs on stage> tommy chong looks over at us above his left shoulder, or ws it right? any way...no matter because he says "you just ate thee most acid that i've ever seen anyone eat, man..uhhuhuh ha"..i like theee vilanelles. thanks.
my attention span fluttered away...boooooooring.
fabulous, one of my all time favourite vilanelles, and in fact, it's the one I taught myself how to write vilanelles with a year ago, thankyou. 9.
I give it Two thumbs DOWN!!
You pull out a PLUM!! (I hope that's a plum. Tell me you didn't put them in your bum?)
Nice!!!!!!!
I just can't stop loving this. I think I'm going to write a Pimple about how much I love it and how it will never love me.
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