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killer boredom butterfly (psychedelic) (Villanelle) by nentwined

there really wasn't much to do that day purple humpback whale spore my mind a butterfly, it fluttered away daisies and petunias entered the fray sad they'd voted for war there really wasn't much to do that day killer butterflies hunting the sway but the sway was too poor my mind a butterfly, it fluttered away ants were marching in careful array speaking haze a grey boar there really wasn't much to do that day some jabber awoke and started to pray pins to pierce and chlorofor- my mind a butterfly, it fluttered away a whale of petunias, a story they say story of pain and gore there really wasn't much to do that day my mind a butterfly, it fluttered away.

horus8 19-Sep-03/3:52 PM
fabulous, one of my all time favourite vilanelles, and in fact, it's the one I taught myself how to write vilanelles with a year ago, thankyou. 9.




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