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killer boredom butterfly (psychedelic) (Villanelle) by nentwined

there really wasn't much to do that day purple humpback whale spore my mind a butterfly, it fluttered away daisies and petunias entered the fray sad they'd voted for war there really wasn't much to do that day killer butterflies hunting the sway but the sway was too poor my mind a butterfly, it fluttered away ants were marching in careful array speaking haze a grey boar there really wasn't much to do that day some jabber awoke and started to pray pins to pierce and chlorofor- my mind a butterfly, it fluttered away a whale of petunias, a story they say story of pain and gore there really wasn't much to do that day my mind a butterfly, it fluttered away.

Bachus 16-Jan-03/5:27 PM
this is totally bitchin bros, fuckin aye.<the warlock blast through a set of blistering songs on stage> tommy chong looks over at us above his left shoulder, or ws it right? any way...no matter because he says "you just ate thee most acid that i've ever seen anyone eat, man..uhhuhuh ha"..i like theee vilanelles. thanks.




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