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The Rebel (Free verse) by Nicholas Jones
I write haikus like Hancock chose action painting - A cow can look on.

Up the ladder: Textbook Examination
Down the ladder: A whisper

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.4
Weighted score: 4.9284782
Overall Rank: 9321
Posted: December 4, 2002 4:13 AM PST; Last modified: December 4, 2002 4:13 AM PST
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[n/a] <~> @ 67.84.171.10 | 4-Dec-02/10:48 PM | Reply
can i milk her while she watches you write?
[n/a] Nicholas Jones @ 137.44.1.200 > <~> | 6-Dec-02/3:07 AM | Reply
She doesn't like being milked by strangers. I think you have to have to seen the film to understand this, otherwise you'll just think I'm weird. Have you ever watched 'The Rebel', starring Tony Hancock? It's superb.
[n/a] ==Doylum @ 62.188.143.40 > Nicholas Jones | 6-Dec-02/4:56 AM | Reply
Dear Jones the P, i think your slightly strange, and it hasn't got anything to do with this poem. i have seen T'rebel.
Are you a cardigan wearing hobnob eater, who drinks very milky tea?
Thats my image of you.
[n/a] Nicholas Jones @ 137.44.1.200 > ==Doylum | 9-Dec-02/2:06 AM | Reply
I do drink fairly milky tea, and lots of it. I don't wear a cardigan, but I am very attached to my woolly, stripy, University of St. Andrews scarf. On the biscuit front, I prefer chocolate digestives, but chocolate hobnobs are the ultimate biscuit to dunk in the aforementioned tea. As for you, have you ever seen the film 'Pi'? I think that's how you live.
[n/a] ==Doylum @ 62.188.131.114 > Nicholas Jones | 9-Dec-02/4:28 AM | Reply
argh yor making my head hurt
[10] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 16-Jan-03/12:15 AM | Reply
Now that's humour. bravo...If you could have three wishes what would they be in reverse?
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