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alone baby (Free verse) by famenglory
I see you alone on that road They've left you alone again Haven't they baby? Won't stare at me with tears in your eyes cuz I don't do that to you Don't show weakness Do you baby? Too small, too dirty, too alone They've taken the high road Taken off without you, never amount to anything They speak of failure Only to you baby I don't see you on that road no more Cuz that road was just a metaphor You're all alone baby all alone baby The Green Sheep Amone the Black and White You aren't accepted baby

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.5
Weighted score: 5.4034123
Overall Rank: 3097
Posted: January 21, 2003 7:12 PM PST; Last modified: January 21, 2003 7:12 PM PST
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[10] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 21-Jan-03/7:28 PM | Reply
now that's the smack down.
[9] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 21-Jan-03/8:04 PM | Reply
pure uranium, i here a ha singing take on me.
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