on Guess the place! by Patsy
15 Aug 2004, 3:55 PM
Oops. Dilapidated. Anything else? i could find anything, so.
on Kept by <{Baba^Yaga}>
11 May 2004, 12:02 AM
i don't know, what kind of virgin runs with a point?
this tasted like the desert/dessert. yum.
this tasted like the desert/dessert. yum.
on romance and chorus lines by unknown^user
11 May 2004, 12:00 AM
i am taken in by your imagery and your self-assured-ness. (real word? don't know)
replying on Submission by Patsy
5 Apr 2004, 7:46 PM
Well, that was kind of the point. So, thanks.
on The back of a shovel? by horus8
18 Jan 2004, 10:46 PM
writing from real life?
on my stuff is like stuff by skaskowski
4 Nov 2003, 1:00 PM
Owie! but good. imagery. mm.
on on a more positive note by calliope
4 Nov 2003, 12:59 PM
is the title ironic, or are you a cynic?
on it's a new crayon by FreeFormFixation
4 Nov 2003, 12:58 PM
like a love poem, only yes and only no.
on Nocturnal Emissions by EAger to Offend
3 Nov 2003, 10:15 PM
"I lick my plate
And meditate" won me over.
And meditate" won me over.
on The Redhead In The Subway by wolfen
3 Nov 2003, 10:13 PM
it seems strange that such a...dirty...poem should rhyme. No matter, i like it.
on At least while you're gone, things get done. by Bachus
3 Nov 2003, 10:12 PM
You have a creepy kind of foreboding tone, which, whether intentional or not, i savour.
on salt and celibacy by calliope
15 Oct 2003, 3:20 PM
i like how it feels in my mouth.
on Horus's Musical Instrument of Torment by Y2kSlamPoet
9 Oct 2003, 7:32 AM
Yes!Egyptian Mythology! Although it's probably about something else! Yes!
on Vest by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?
6 Sep 2003, 11:18 AM
It's a big good laugh :)
on justly now included by A. Nomaly
1 Sep 2003, 11:00 PM
for some reason, i love love the fact that the spanish rhymes so well. Nicely done.
on Burning your desert down by Jeremi B. Handrinos
30 Aug 2003, 3:22 PM
the second stanza, with the "none to see" didn't fit in my head, but the imagery is beautiful. the idea is beautiful.
on Molecular Parasitology Nerdcore Rap by Retaliate
13 Aug 2003, 5:45 AM
Ha! i like it, if only because i'm still laughing.
on midnight, on a weekday by peaceseeker
13 Aug 2003, 5:42 AM
i enojoy the amount of anxiety and the kind of tumbling of words that seems to come from having no breaks.