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justly now included (Free verse) by A. Nomaly REALLY really rotting
steely pulse
hopped in a cart to second
street with mi abuelita, no
te conocido, luckily inside
the backpack was sunscreen
45, no.2 Ticonderoga (feeling
rich, keys to all the locks- the
bike the house and one forgotten,
(wings and wicked from back
pain), one tie one white shirt-
all the buttons reinforced, (slick
tied memories and getting reborn)
currently without a watch
Up the ladder:
Waves (2)
Down the ladder:
The Cock crows a rooster deep
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Posted: September 1, 2003 9:59 PM PDT; Last modified: September 1, 2003 9:59 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.576303 Overall Rank: 2380 Comments:
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Patsy @ 24.79.239.114
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1-Sep-03/11:00 PM
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for some reason, i love love the fact that the spanish rhymes so well. Nicely done.
Abuelita? Little grandmother?
I like your style.
For sure.
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