justly now included

Member since 2002 · Posted 1 Sep 2003 · 3 comments

REALLY really rotting steely pulse hopped in a cart to second street with mi abuelita, no te conocido, luckily inside the backpack was sunscreen 45, no.2 Ticonderoga (feeling rich, keys to all the locks- the bike the house and one forgotten, (wings and wicked from back pain), one tie one white shirt- all the buttons reinforced, (slick tied memories and getting reborn) currently without a watch

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[8] Patsy 1-Sep-03/11:00 PM Reply

for some reason, i love love the fact that the spanish rhymes so well. Nicely done.

[9] http://mulberryfairy 2-Sep-03/10:45 AM Reply

Abuelita? Little grandmother?
I like your style.

[10] Bachus 2-Sep-03/3:02 PM Reply

For sure.