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Waves (2) (Free verse) by Rilke4ClosetLesbians One moment
a sliver of infinity
like reflections of
two facing mirrors,
a single pane of glass
Return to me, singing
all at once forever
a single voice multiplied,
as thick as it is thin
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Posted: August 19, 2003 2:36 PM PDT; Last modified: August 19, 2003 2:36 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.576303 Overall Rank: 2379 Comments:
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RGallet @ 67.75.22.132
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19-Aug-03/6:13 PM
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I like the use of rhyme.
Hi, my name is Rich and I find Rob Lowe incredibly sexy (Hi Rich)
Jeremi told me I was a lesbian. He knows so much about these things. And in response to the second stanza, do you know how fucking hard it is to find a place right now?? This girl wanted me to live in her living room, now she's moving out. Sweet Jesu, sweet Jesu Glace cut in chunks and whipped into Calvanist roulade filling, this is frustrating.
I hate you and your little dog too.
Wait is your muse your whole genital region or just the shaft??
Because of this comment, I wrote a new poem...
Am I the only one not surprised at how familiar R.M. Rilke is with choking it down?? See, you all made fun of me when I said he was homotic, but the proof is in the pudding.
Wow. Almost deep and meaningful. But not quite. 7
cool
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