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justly now included (Free verse) by A. Nomaly

REALLY really rotting steely pulse hopped in a cart to second street with mi abuelita, no te conocido, luckily inside the backpack was sunscreen 45, no.2 Ticonderoga (feeling rich, keys to all the locks- the bike the house and one forgotten, (wings and wicked from back pain), one tie one white shirt- all the buttons reinforced, (slick tied memories and getting reborn) currently without a watch

Patsy 1-Sep-03/11:00 PM
for some reason, i love love the fact that the spanish rhymes so well. Nicely done.




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