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The back of a shovel? (Free verse) by horus8
Against your fucking face. Then a stale cigarette, and sex with a blow up doll I keep next to the muddy boots in my closet.
Down the ladder: Transmissional Dance
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 6.0
Overall Rank: 1281
Posted: January 17, 2004 3:54 PM PST; Last modified: January 17, 2004 6:01 PM PST
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[n/a] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 | 17-Jan-04/5:39 PM | Reply
"Then..." I think?

good one.
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.112.80 > Shuushin | 17-Jan-04/6:01 PM | Reply
Yes, I always was a quick lay, thanks.
[10] sk8rs_rule_all @ 24.160.153.131 | 17-Jan-04/6:11 PM | Reply
Damn, reminds me of my friend....the sad pathetic yet poetic soul.
[8] Patsy @ 24.67.189.245 | 18-Jan-04/10:46 PM | Reply
writing from real life?
[7] basit_i @ 161.184.182.110 | 21-Jan-04/1:33 PM | Reply
hmm. imagery is intense, at any rate. for whatever that's worth. ^_^
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