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Free verse № 82790

Transmissional Dance

Member since 2004 · Posted 28 Jan 2004 · 1 comment

No mode of transportation For a soldier with no nation Fighting for a cause To obliterate the materialistic laws While people die from their plight We still have our lights To even out is our destination We must have limits of temptation Figure out laws of gravitation How could you just kill fellow man? Why not offer him a hand Levity is the answer to predicament But your condition’s nature is to be malevolent Live a life of compassion Instead of a life of regression Living outside condensation Hopes to replace a federation Enlightenment through meditation

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[3] Sam 28-Jan-04/9:30 PM Reply
The rhymes and the meters does'nt quite go smoothly.