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Transmissional Dance (Free verse) by Red Optimist
No mode of transportation
For a soldier with no nation
Fighting for a cause
To obliterate the materialistic laws
While people die from their plight
We still have our lights
To even out is our destination
We must have limits of temptation
Figure out laws of gravitation
How could you just kill fellow man?
Why not offer him a hand
Levity is the answer to predicament
But your conditionâs nature is to be malevolent
Live a life of compassion
Instead of a life of regression
Living outside condensation
Hopes to replace a federation
Enlightenment through meditation
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 6.0
Overall Rank: 1282
Posted: January 28, 2004 5:28 PM PST; Last modified: January 28, 2004 5:28 PM PST
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