regarding some deleted poem...	15-Oct-03/3:24 PM
If nothing else, at least it resonates. Somehow.
regarding some deleted poem...	15-Oct-03/3:25 PM
A little too sentimental for me, made me think of the time i left a teddy bear uner a tree and it moulded. Good use of language, though.
regarding some deleted poem...	3-Nov-03/10:10 PM
Mmm. tangible wistfulness.
Re: At least while you're gone, things get done. by Bachus	3-Nov-03/10:12 PM
You have a creepy kind of foreboding tone, which, whether intentional or not, i savour.
Re: The Redhead In The Subway by wolfen	3-Nov-03/10:13 PM
it seems strange that such a...dirty...poem should rhyme. No matter, i like it.
Re: Nocturnal Emissions by EAger to Offend	3-Nov-03/10:15 PM
"I lick my plate And meditate" won me over.
Re: it's a new crayon by FreeFormFixation	4-Nov-03/12:58 PM
like a love poem, only yes and only no.
Re: on a more positive note by calliope	4-Nov-03/12:59 PM
is the title ironic, or are you a cynic?
Re: my stuff is like stuff by skaskowski	4-Nov-03/1:00 PM
Owie! but good. imagery. mm.
Re: Aspic by Shardik	4-Nov-03/1:01 PM
Fascinating. As a vegetarian, i can't quite relate, but you certainly sexualize it...well.
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Nov-03/1:01 PM
i think it means god.
regarding some deleted poem...	28-Nov-03/10:39 PM
Fascinating. Am intrigued. Hesitate to call favourite, since i seem to acquire a new one all the time, but would like to know more of this: recent? And what are the spiders?
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Jan-04/8:14 AM
i had not read this one for a while. Coming back to it, i like it even more, possibly because i have been listening to Bruce Co(ck)burn and find echos of him in here.
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Jan-04/3:16 PM
i enjoy the second half much more than the first, save for the delicious "wild cells". "Scar shower", too, is enough to take one. For some reason it seems uncharacteristically short for you, but that is neither here nor there--just observation. Now who knows what? i need no point-fives for this.
regarding some deleted poem...	18-Jan-04/10:41 PM
Well, you're honest.
Re: The back of a shovel? by horus8	18-Jan-04/10:46 PM
writing from real life?
Re: romance and chorus lines by unknown^user	11-May-04/12:00 AM
i am taken in by your imagery and your self-assured-ness. (real word? don't know)
Re: Kept by <{Baba^Yaga}>	11-May-04/12:02 AM
i don't know, what kind of virgin runs with a point? this tasted like the desert/dessert. yum.
Re: Guess the place! by Patsy	15-Aug-04/3:55 PM
Oops. Dilapidated. Anything else? i could find anything, so.
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Oct-04/11:32 PM
Realized i had never commented on this. Am taken with it, a year later. it reminds of you then, harkens you now. Do not step on my shadow. Do not step on my shadow. And such was the Fall." Renders an indelible sadness. (not of real events, i'm not sublimating here-i mean taken by itself)