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Guess the place! (Free verse) by Patsy
This city remains,
despite the natural laws.
This city seems a facade
a tinted glass to obscure the dilapdated
past.
Overcompensation for lacerations
earned through size and concentration.
It remains indecisive:
am i floating or simply allowing a mass/Maas to flow through?
Despite bravado,
macho demeanor superimposed
on fate which happens and happens and cannot
unhappen,
this city would that it could drift.
Would that it could fall amnesiac.
Its tinted past glass is somedays
turned aquarium.
The sun comes in and no out in sight,
now reflect, then inward, to preen.
It's not asking your approval,
preferring your silent, if sticky
retreat.
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Weighted score: 5.493059
Overall Rank: 2804
Posted: August 14, 2004 2:38 PM PDT; Last modified: August 14, 2004 2:38 PM PDT
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