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Bridesmaids in the Rain (Triolet) by wilco Dancing with the bridesmaids in the rain
as you drain your eyes.
Drinking wine and stale champagne
and dancing with the bridesmaids in the rain.
I remember watching you board the train
against a September sunrise.
Dancing with the bridesmaids in the rain
as you drain your eyes.
Up the ladder:
Ode to the Bun
Down the ladder:
Trust
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Posted: September 29, 2004 8:00 PM PDT; Last modified: February 12, 2005 8:18 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.493059 Overall Rank: 2794 Comments:
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29-Sep-04/9:40 PM
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Strap on a pair!
leaves little room for imagination
"last of the first glass" good line
It's the cahmpagne. Love and marriage - they seldom go together. Dream on and enjoy the slow dance at a wedding that isn't yours. Good thoughts
I seem to have had a brain fart there.
so good, very nice picture. *9*
"Dancing with the (INSERT CLICHE)
Cliche, cliche, cliche What rhymes with RAIN? Cliche, cliche, Candy Cane Cliche, cliche, vomit stain dancing with the....ooops, I'm passing out from boredom....
Geez, I guess I made you mad by not liking your HTML thingie. Sorry.
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