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Bridesmaids in the Rain (Triolet) by wilco
Dancing with the bridesmaids in the rain as you drain your eyes. Drinking wine and stale champagne and dancing with the bridesmaids in the rain. I remember watching you board the train against a September sunrise. Dancing with the bridesmaids in the rain as you drain your eyes.

Up the ladder: Silent Tears
Down the ladder: Harvester of Sorrow

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.8333335
Weighted score: 5.493059
Overall Rank: 2766
Posted: September 29, 2004 8:00 PM PDT; Last modified: February 12, 2005 8:18 PM PST
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Comments:
[1] Special Needs @ 130.216.191.183 | 29-Sep-04/9:40 PM | Reply
Strap on a pair!
[6] That One @ 68.123.215.216 | 29-Sep-04/10:19 PM | Reply
leaves little room for imagination

"last of the first glass" good line
[8] Dovina @ 204.250.12.246 | 3-Oct-04/10:57 AM | Reply
It's the cahmpagne. Love and marriage - they seldom go together. Dream on and enjoy the slow dance at a wedding that isn't yours. Good thoughts
[n/a] wilco @ 4.226.81.98 > Dovina | 4-Oct-04/8:02 PM | Reply
I seem to have had a brain fart there.
[9] MacFrantic @ 152.163.100.67 | 12-Feb-05/8:25 PM | Reply
so good, very nice picture. *9*
[5] Plaidypus @ 68.14.27.48 | 14-Feb-05/9:02 PM | Reply
"Dancing with the (INSERT CLICHE)
Cliche, cliche, cliche
What rhymes with RAIN?
Cliche, cliche, Candy Cane
Cliche, cliche, vomit stain
dancing with the....ooops, I'm passing out from boredom....
[n/a] wilco @ 24.165.207.93 > Plaidypus | 15-Feb-05/2:12 PM | Reply
Geez, I guess I made you mad by not liking your HTML thingie. Sorry.
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