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it's a new crayon (Free verse) by FreeFormFixation
some like it clever, oh! the cleverness drips from her fingertips whetting my earppatite clutching me sensuously. i just cant wait to stake a claim on her. no-one's as anti-lame as her. but maybe i'm a game to her. but i just can't bear to refrain from her. because i like it clever, oh! the sweetness pours from my pourous throat whetting her appeal-attite pulling her in so seamlessly. she just cant wait to put her lips on me. no-one's as anti-shitty as me. so maybe she's a game to me. but she just can't bear to refrain from me. because she likes it sweet.

Up the ladder: Celebrity
Down the ladder: nanana

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6666665
Weighted score: 4.9103527
Overall Rank: 9678
Posted: November 3, 2003 11:34 PM PST; Last modified: November 3, 2003 11:34 PM PST
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[5] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.116.54 | 4-Nov-03/1:15 AM | Reply
"whetting my earppatite" what?

Porus8 is a pumice felcher.

But you my friend would felch a Klingon.
[7] deleted user @ 81.86.237.14 | 4-Nov-03/6:41 AM | Reply
earpattite don't work but anti-lame is cool
[8] Patsy @ 24.67.189.245 | 4-Nov-03/12:58 PM | Reply
like a love poem, only yes and only no.
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