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ditched by them slowpokes (Free verse) by skaskowski females
leave grease trails
like tree snails.
we males
find sea shells
and she bails.
Up the ladder:
Crumb
Down the ladder:
First Love
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Posted: October 18, 2003 12:45 AM PDT; Last modified: October 18, 2003 12:45 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.9103527 Overall Rank: 9683 Comments:
this totally cracked me up. though i don't exactly understand the second verse. i mean, usually it's the guys who bail, right?
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