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Free verse № 70929

ditched by them slowpokes

Member since 2001 · Posted 18 Oct 2003 · 2 comments

females leave grease trails like tree snails. we males find sea shells and she bails.

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[5] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 18-Oct-03/5:27 AM Reply
first verse: 10
Second verse: 0
Average: 5
[5] muted_screams 18-Oct-03/7:12 AM Reply
this totally cracked me up. though i don't exactly understand the second verse. i mean, usually it's the guys who bail, right?