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My Love (Free verse) by baby_d
I'll love you for a thousand year, and then a million more. My love is an endless river that flows just for you. My love is a blazzing fire that burns only for you. My love is a hunger just for you that aches to feel you touch. I'll love you for a thousand years, and then a million more.

Up the ladder: Wanting
Down the ladder: Price of an Affair

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6666665
Weighted score: 4.9103527
Overall Rank: 9670
Posted: November 11, 2003 7:58 PM PST; Last modified: November 11, 2003 7:58 PM PST
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Comments:
[1] ShaNoN+960317485 @ 199.40.206.3 | 11-Nov-03/8:30 PM | Reply
Just dont know - But ask me in a million years:o(
[10] wFraser Allonby Q.C.w @ 195.157.153.253 | 12-Nov-03/4:21 AM | Reply
You have said on your "user" page, under the heading "About": "I am in valid"

Do you mean that you are "an invalid" (i.e. a cripple)?

Or do you mean that you are "invalid" (i.e. not valid)?

If the latter, please tell me the ways in which you are not valid.

Yours,

Fraser.

P.S. I love your poems!!!!!!!!!!!!

P.P.S. I think you are great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

P.P.P.S. Will you marry me?????!????????!!!!!!!!!!!???
[n/a] baby_d @ 205.217.81.74 > wFraser Allonby Q.C.w | 12-Nov-03/8:05 PM | Reply
You have some serious problems man. I just missed spelled a word. What I ment was that I was in a serios long - term relationship. We are on the merge of getting engagged. But I think it is great that you like me poems. You don't known me that well to known that I am great.
[n/a] Mona Lisa @ 62.105.119.105 | 12-Nov-03/4:23 AM | Reply
Oh dear
[n/a] baby_d @ 205.217.81.74 | 12-Nov-03/7:59 PM | Reply
Fuck you. I hate that guy.
[n/a] baby_d @ 205.217.81.74 > baby_d | 12-Nov-03/8:01 PM | Reply
never mind
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