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All Alone (Free verse) by QuirkyWonder
You're eyes are bleeding
A deep red ribbon
You're heart is crying
A deep blue ocean
But emersed into your pain
Is where you lost all your emotions
You've lost all control
To the voice within
You're rambling words are echoed
Against your hollow soul
You've lost yourself in darkness
Behind the walls of the rest
You're trying to climb over
But you seem to just keep falling
Back into the darkness
In the loneliness of yourself
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Weighted score: 4.9103527
Overall Rank: 9682
Posted: May 1, 2004 9:03 PM PDT; Last modified: May 1, 2004 9:03 PM PDT
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Third person would be "he", "she", "they", "[person's name]"
First person was like your reply (above).