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All Alone (Free verse) by QuirkyWonder

You're eyes are bleeding A deep red ribbon You're heart is crying A deep blue ocean But emersed into your pain Is where you lost all your emotions You've lost all control To the voice within You're rambling words are echoed Against your hollow soul You've lost yourself in darkness Behind the walls of the rest You're trying to climb over But you seem to just keep falling Back into the darkness In the loneliness of yourself

Shuushin 2-May-04/7:12 PM
This poem (and apparently those poems you like) is second person.

Third person would be "he", "she", "they", "[person's name]"

First person was like your reply (above).




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