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All Alone (Free verse) by QuirkyWonder

You're eyes are bleeding A deep red ribbon You're heart is crying A deep blue ocean But emersed into your pain Is where you lost all your emotions You've lost all control To the voice within You're rambling words are echoed Against your hollow soul You've lost yourself in darkness Behind the walls of the rest You're trying to climb over But you seem to just keep falling Back into the darkness In the loneliness of yourself

hypatia 2-May-04/9:05 AM
Thank you for describing me so well. Please tell me how I am different, and how you know so much about me. Actually, I think this sort of thing is best written in the first person, unless you give the reasons that compell you to so describe another.




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