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Free verse № 73408

on a more positive note

Member since 2003 · Posted 3 Nov 2003 · 2 comments

we suffer for the sake of someone's selfish entertainment. video games on a 3-D screen. pixels and forms forming fixed fickle trickles, life sometimes tickles but seldom not to excess, some obsessed chess-fiending masochistic sadist savors each second of our indiscretion.

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[5] <{Baba^Yaga}> 4-Nov-03/1:18 AM Reply
God is a pair of training wheels hanging up in some shed in Vermont watching the dust dance in a widows stale sun box.
[6] Patsy 4-Nov-03/12:59 PM Reply
is the title ironic, or are you a cynic?