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on a more positive note (Free verse) by calliope
we suffer for the sake of someone's selfish entertainment. video games on a 3-D screen. pixels and forms forming fixed fickle trickles, life sometimes tickles but seldom not to excess, some obsessed chess-fiending masochistic sadist savors each second of our indiscretion.

Up the ladder: little angel
Down the ladder: All Square

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.2
Weighted score: 4.7854347
Overall Rank: 11318
Posted: November 3, 2003 11:43 PM PST; Last modified: November 3, 2003 11:43 PM PST
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[5] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.116.54 | 4-Nov-03/1:18 AM | Reply
God is a pair of training wheels hanging up in some shed in Vermont watching the dust dance in a widows stale sun box.
[6] Patsy @ 24.67.189.245 | 4-Nov-03/12:59 PM | Reply
is the title ironic, or are you a cynic?
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