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A Different Point Of View (Free verse) by Billy Biff-Chin Sitting here by myself
While you infiltrate someone else
You stabbed the knife in my back
I was just another one of your toys on the rack
I was blinded by your beauty
I could not see the way you mistreated me
I wish you would go away
You still flirt with me to this day
Even after you drove that nail in my foot
After I put
My trust into you
My inner beauty to you
My heart into you
You ripped my heart into shreds ; it now bleeds
The blood coming from my heart feeds
My anger ; getting stronger
Towards you...
Up the ladder:
Distastefully Hairy Quendo
Down the ladder:
little angel
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Posted: February 4, 2004 3:24 AM PST; Last modified: February 4, 2004 3:24 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.7854347 Overall Rank: 11317 Comments:
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wFraser Allonby Q.C.w @ 195.157.153.253
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4-Feb-04/3:29 AM
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Ha ha! That's absolutely rubbish! You call yourself a poet? I don't know who you are, Mr Billy Biff-Chin, but I suggest you fuck off and never return. This poem is mind-numbingly shit. This should be placed in an anthology of the world's worst poems. -0-
The best part of this is when I misread heart as beast
'[after I put] my beast into you'
And shame on you Fraser (if that is not you real name) for mocking a 13year old.
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