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Pain (Free verse) by PoeticJustice
The flames are all around
My anger engulfs me
I feel like I'm going to drown
There's no one to set me free
They come closer
It burns me now
I've become a poser
Under the pressure I finally bow
My thoughts travel to you
With my last breath I smile
Knowing you didn't have a clue
I wish you had stayed a while
You turned and walked away
It hurt to watch you go
But I bet you'll wish you had stayed
As my body goes limp from head to toe
The lighter falls from my hand
You said you hate me
Screamed that I should understand
To let you and my sister be
You're hers now
I've let you go, we're through
Since you forgot your vow
Just know that mine were true
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.2
Weighted score: 4.7854347
Overall Rank: 11315
Posted: September 23, 2006 7:33 PM PDT; Last modified: September 23, 2006 7:33 PM PDT
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