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Kept (Ghazal) by <{Baba^Yaga}>
You hold me like a steering wheel
Tight and defensive, now this is living.
Lucky I'm compulsive, or you'd live in squalor
Without humor, good cooking, or exotic pets.
Brass snooze button, and neon collars
Sometimes I think I could iron the horse.
Running, bent at the heel and frothing
Racing head long into the next turn.
When I said I do, you did, then so did I
Again, and again, and again, I feel rice.
Up my nose and down my bra, what
kind of virgin runs with a point?
I'm not out to change a thing,
but the Channel, and your mind.
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.4444447
Weighted score: 6.2222223
Overall Rank: 962
Posted: May 10, 2004 11:19 PM PDT; Last modified: May 11, 2004 2:21 PM PDT
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this tasted like the desert/dessert. yum.