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Vest (Sonnet) by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?
I always detest, Not wearing a vest, On Scafell Pike crest. When wearing a vest, You're effectively blessed, With a portable nest.

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6190476
Weighted score: 5.6079135
Overall Rank: 2281
Posted: September 5, 2003 12:01 PM PDT; Last modified: September 5, 2003 3:48 PM PDT
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[7] electroman1979 @ 198.81.26.109 | 5-Sep-03/4:15 PM | Reply
its good, i like it
[7] Nicholas Jones @ 137.44.1.200 | 6-Sep-03/4:38 AM | Reply
Hmm. Not as good as the last one. But references to tall hills are to be encouraged.
[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 80.4.5.122 > Nicholas Jones | 6-Sep-03/10:10 AM | Reply
You are a prime dunce. How can you not give "portable nest" a 10?
[n/a] <~> @ 64.252.173.100 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 6-Sep-03/9:01 PM | Reply
is this grandfather? is this poem about grandfather's vest????
[n/a] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? @ 195.92.67.70 > <~> | 7-Sep-03/2:22 PM | Reply
What are you talking about???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
[7] Patsy @ 24.79.239.114 | 6-Sep-03/11:18 AM | Reply
It's a big good laugh :)
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