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Horus's Musical Instrument of Torment (Other) by Y2kSlamPoet Horus reciting poem
and blowin on a harmonica
is quite an experience;
a cross between calm enjoyment
and extreme irritation.
Each squeal of that harmonica
disrupts my tranquil mood
and induces in me a feeling
of hatred, along with a desire
to melt that cursed instrument
and bury it in wet cement.
Never-the-less, it was an experience
from which I learned poetry
and harmonica tunes are not
the best combination--
Kill the harmonica.
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| No offense, I enjoy most of your music, |
| but I really hope you lose that harmonica |
| and never buy another. |
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Posted: October 8, 2003 4:17 AM PDT; Last modified: October 8, 2003 12:26 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.2145653 Overall Rank: 4354 Comments:
this best part:
"to melt that cursed instrument and bury it in wet cement." is sadly buried in the rest of it - but your audience of one will likely appreciate the piece more. which is cool.
Yes!Egyptian Mythology! Although it's probably about something else! Yes!
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it was "creature of habit" that i was listening to when writing this, jarred me to full wakening in a flash.