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Horus's Musical Instrument of Torment

by Y2kSlamPoet

Member since 2003 · Posted 8 Oct 2003 · Edited 8 Oct 2003 · 4 comments

Horus reciting poem and blowin on a harmonica is quite an experience; a cross between calm enjoyment and extreme irritation. Each squeal of that harmonica disrupts my tranquil mood and induces in me a feeling of hatred, along with a desire to melt that cursed instrument and bury it in wet cement. Never-the-less, it was an experience from which I learned poetry and harmonica tunes are not the best combination-- Kill the harmonica. ____________________________________________ | | | No offense, I enjoy most of your music, | | but I really hope you lose that harmonica | | and never buy another. | |____________________________________________|

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[9] <{Baba^Yaga}> 8-Oct-03/12:10 PM Reply
He accidentilly swallowed it two years ago on a bet that he was actually a robot. typo in the title, by the way.
[n/a] Y2kSlamPoet › <{Baba^Yaga}> 8-Oct-03/12:24 PM Reply
oi.. goddamn-it, i never get spelling perfect.

it was "creature of habit" that i was listening to when writing this, jarred me to full wakening in a flash.
[n/a] Shuushin 9-Oct-03/6:59 AM Reply
this best part:
"to melt that cursed instrument
and bury it in wet cement."

is sadly buried in the rest of it - but your audience of one will likely appreciate the piece more.

which is cool.
[10] Patsy 9-Oct-03/7:32 AM Reply
Yes!Egyptian Mythology! Although it's probably about something else! Yes!