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Horus's Musical Instrument of Torment (Other) by Y2kSlamPoet

Horus reciting poem and blowin on a harmonica is quite an experience; a cross between calm enjoyment and extreme irritation. Each squeal of that harmonica disrupts my tranquil mood and induces in me a feeling of hatred, along with a desire to melt that cursed instrument and bury it in wet cement. Never-the-less, it was an experience from which I learned poetry and harmonica tunes are not the best combination-- Kill the harmonica. ____________________________________________ | | | No offense, I enjoy most of your music, | | but I really hope you lose that harmonica | | and never buy another. | |____________________________________________|

Shuushin 9-Oct-03/6:59 AM
this best part:
"to melt that cursed instrument
and bury it in wet cement."

is sadly buried in the rest of it - but your audience of one will likely appreciate the piece more.

which is cool.




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