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salt and celibacy (Free verse) by calliope freezing.
whammy-brandished.
clawed calypso.
stolen cargo.
dead libido.
swans and seagulls.
ports and starboard.
sails and portholes.
shore leave.
clammy-kitchens.
clawing kittens.
stolen moment.
torrid surface.
ocean refuge.
pale and patient.
waves and windbreaks.
saline.
eyes and entrails.
cloudy fog-trails.
frigid fevers.
all-enveloped.
midnight shimmers.
glassy highway.
memory-dimmers.
Up the ladder:
Temptation In Genesis
Down the ladder:
Wanking In The Bucket
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Posted: October 14, 2003 2:46 PM PDT; Last modified: October 14, 2003 2:46 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.3 Overall Rank: 3690 Comments:
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Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177
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14-Oct-03/7:43 PM
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I'm liking the title, and many of the individual lines. As for the thing-in-itself, I will nod knowingly, and select six from the dropdown menu at right.
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abecedarian @ 164.67.82.153
> Shuushin
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14-Oct-03/8:12 PM
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I do not know this shoeshiner person, but I find myself in the odd position of agreeing (several times recently). Strange.
Interesting.
does a failing libido equal celibacy? Stick to musing.
i like how it feels in my mouth.
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