Re: a comment on great caesar's ghost by bondjedi |
25-Jul-03/4:26 PM |
how does this degrade women?
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Re: Love by simone_girard |
14-Jul-03/11:38 AM |
From the Ma Joad tradition of poetry. The cliches, similarity to your other poems, misuse of "your", and reluctance to respect God by capitalizing his name add up to a big honking 1.
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Re: a comment on Dear Lord by simone_girard |
7-Jun-03/5:24 AM |
there is one good line in this poem, the opening one, and the only reason it's good is because you are as good a speller as you are a poet.
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Re: My girl by simone_girard |
7-Jun-03/5:20 AM |
I can't wait to read the published version in the next issue of "Poems Written By and For Retards Monthly". Seriously, this is execrable. It sounds like it was written by a pioneer lady on the Oregon Trail who had her child kidnapped by an Apache war party. You get a four and you're lucky to get that.
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Re: Symbol Of Love by simone_girard |
7-Jun-03/5:14 AM |
babies should sleep on their backs, freeing you up to write about something else equally depressing. you get a five.
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Re: Final Comment by dougsoderstrom |
28-May-03/12:47 AM |
That's it, blame the critics for your own failings. This screed sounds like Richard Nixon in '62 when he lost the Governor's race. "You won't have Dougie Soderstrom to kick around anymore!" Like Nixon, you too I fear shall return.
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Re: Theology by dougsoderstrom |
25-May-03/1:37 PM |
this is a great poem - not! I suspect you are writing bad poems on purpose to receive recognition, of a sort, on the bottom 15. you get a ten.
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Re: no more by wordho |
24-Apr-03/5:31 AM |
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Re: Staying Sane by ThoughtfulSoul |
24-Apr-03/5:29 AM |
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Re: the real 2 by bxjay170 |
24-Apr-03/5:26 AM |
wretched. since that's the point, i give you an 8. well done
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Re: a comment on isms and ities by Amelia |
24-Apr-03/5:24 AM |
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Re: The Nude by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
21-Apr-03/11:02 AM |
this should be on the top 15 list, not the bottom 15. at the same time it is truly awful. i give you a 5
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Re: i will not come to bangladesh by lost in america |
20-Apr-03/1:06 PM |
Not as sexy as the title would suggest - oh, I thought it said come ON Bangladesh. Sorry . You get an 8.
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Re: Summer by MaliqaTara |
20-Apr-03/1:04 PM |
maybe if you swallowed something other than your pain he would still be around. I give you a 4.
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Re: Letters by discordia |
20-Apr-03/12:59 PM |
the death rattle of a stalker.
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Re: A Dream of Dragons by JohnnyW |
20-Apr-03/12:33 PM |
banal and pedantic. you get a 2.
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Re: Keanu Vs The mystery of life by Shardik |
20-Apr-03/12:26 PM |
Timely in this year of Matrix films.
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Re: Mississipi Murder by scitz |
20-Apr-03/12:22 PM |
"sheeps"? And if you can't spell "Mississippi", then by all means use "MS". I give you a 6 because I'm a Gene Hackman fan.
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Re: Dance With Me by marvelis |
20-Apr-03/12:20 PM |
I am not fond of peotry about one's mother. I give you a 4.
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Re: Severe Acute Respiratory Syndrome by Stephen Robins |
17-Apr-03/4:05 AM |
in other words, ah-ah-achoooo!
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