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Staying Sane (Free verse) by ThoughtfulSoul Am I ok?
Do I look alright to you?
Should I be like this, because everyone is not
I talk to the ones that answer me back and
unfortunetly that's just too few
Will I be ok?
Cause this doesnt look too good for me
Why must I conform to all this shit.
Things dont have to go anything like this.
Talking to myself is better anyway, cause
I never have anything smart to say
Everything should be like this, but people say I'm just insane
Well fuck that then I guess I'll be the only fuckin whacko with a smile.
Up the ladder:
Morman On A Bike
Down the ladder:
moment in time
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Posted: April 15, 2003 4:41 PM PDT; Last modified: April 23, 2003 1:29 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.809275 Overall Rank: 11005 Comments:
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d35 @ 130.111.0.42
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16-Apr-03/9:45 AM
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nice as always
And a ten, a "smil" and a ten. Make that eleven. ele'en is one more then ten.
Insanity is abandoning the same place the sane man is standing. This diagnosis is handing a prior notion demanding we all have an equal understanding. This is why we see people landing all over the spectrum of sane to insane, and it's no true reflection cause a brain is a brain. But somehow that's no exception. we're expected to reach perfection
vulgar and lazy.
Are you plasticgirlwithgun? Where is plasticgirlwithgun I miss that posh forked tongue.
This makes you sound a bit pathetic, insanity is recommended for anyone on ranker, see you in the canteen with angelina and winona and we'll smoke a bleeding fist over processed tuna and big momma. 188 view(s)
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