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Staying Sane (Free verse) by ThoughtfulSoul

Am I ok? Do I look alright to you? Should I be like this, because everyone is not I talk to the ones that answer me back and unfortunetly that's just too few Will I be ok? Cause this doesnt look too good for me Why must I conform to all this shit. Things dont have to go anything like this. Talking to myself is better anyway, cause I never have anything smart to say Everything should be like this, but people say I'm just insane Well fuck that then I guess I'll be the only fuckin whacko with a smile.

Shardik 16-Apr-03/4:37 PM
And a ten, a "smil" and a ten. Make that eleven. ele'en is one more then ten.




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