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the real 2 (Free verse) by bxjay170
i was told men never cry
so i guys am confuse cauze i been crying all my life
stuck in thi dirt hole wordering why i was delk this hand
ti'll this day i still can't understand
these aint words from my mind its pain from my heart
my life is falling apart or is it forming a destiny i must pass by to
get where my dreams are
is this a test, is this a game or am i a mistake
no matter how low i get i never let myself think i failed
my life is like a song its all in detail
i remember as a young kid crying tellin my mom to exhale
and never to bow down to such a fake male
looking at all this in the streets ofcourse i grew a mastermind
u say u love me so why pops u left me in the grind
naw your kid aint fine
most people tell me i aint worth a dime
i wish the world knew there was so much more to me
this aint just poetry
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.5
Weighted score: 4.9403987
Overall Rank: 9048
Posted: April 23, 2003 10:17 AM PDT; Last modified: April 23, 2003 10:17 AM PDT
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