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he was the one i had written about before i met him

Member since 2002 · Posted 28 Apr 2003 · 2 comments

what are you gonna do when he comes up next to you swerving in the gravel on his bike talking to you in the dwindling sunshine your feet locating stones in the driveway your thumb rubbing the quarter in your pocket

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[7] <{Baba^Yaga}> 28-Apr-03/5:14 PM Reply
Rub my quarter too? and raise him a pack of melting double mint in pocet number 'the rear'.
[8] thepinkbunnyofdoom 28-Apr-03/6:47 PM Reply
If I was girl I'd kiss him goodnight but since I'm not I'd say "see ya later" -8-