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he was the one i had written about before i met him (Free verse) by rockinindividual what are you gonna do
when he comes up next to you
swerving in the gravel on his bike
talking to you in the dwindling sunshine
your feet locating stones in the driveway
your thumb rubbing the quarter in your pocket
Up the ladder:
the real 2
Down the ladder:
Lost In Reality, Enlightened By Confusion
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Posted: April 28, 2003 4:41 PM PDT; Last modified: April 28, 2003 4:41 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.9403987 Overall Rank: 9044 Comments:
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<{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154
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28-Apr-03/5:14 PM
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Rub my quarter too? and raise him a pack of melting double mint in pocet number 'the rear'.
If I was girl I'd kiss him goodnight but since I'm not I'd say "see ya later" -8-
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