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Theology (Free verse) by dougsoderstrom
Theology
O perfect kingdom,
Ancient womb of our souls,
Born out of love,
And nurtured by âthe giver of life,â
Ignorant, innocent, unwitting, and unclothed,
Yet protected from every single stain,
Spotless---- no blemish to be found,
But without even a wisp of its own breath,
A mere reflection of âa much greater part,â
Born without choice,
Forced to be a part of Eden.
And then an alien voice---- an archaic sound,
A Luciferian call âto know,â
An offer to be set free----- to be loosed from âall restraint,â
A cerebral gift for thought,
The capacity to choose for oneâs self,
An âoriginal sin,â
An urge to leave oneâs home,
No condemnation, neither even expelled,
Just âa simple leaving,â
A âProdigal Choice,â
A dauntless resolution,
A decision to become a human being.
Two separate beings------- an Adam and an Eve,
A ying and a yang,
Polar opposites----- pulled together like North to South,
An inevitable merger, conjoined at the hip---- âbelly to belly,â
By a force much greater than life itself,
A need to procreate, to extend oneâs life,
A search for immortality,
An excuse, a weakness, an Achillesâ Heel,
A passion to taste of âThe Treeâs first fruit,â
An earthly misadventure----a coital error,
An orgasmic entrance into life itself,
Leaving âthe kingdomâ from whence one came.
The miracle of two seeds having become one,
New life----- one more soul added to the vastness of mankind,
Yet, in the twinkling of an eye,
The child becomes a man,
Never knowing why he is here,
Why he has been allowed to ârun rampant upon the earth,â
Did he forget,
Or is it that he did not want to know,
That everyone is a Prodigal Son----- that each has ventured far from
home,
That all âare lost,â that each of us is adrift in âa common sea,â
That every man, and women, and child is doomed, that there is no way out,
Except that we find the âonly way of escape,â
Salvation----- namely, the choice to become âa man of sorrows,â
A realization that this is truly âa land of sadness,â a place we no
longer wish to be,
That there be a choice to leave,
A resolute rejection of all that constitutes âthe world of man,â
That we long to be crucified, that we yearn for a way of release, that
we cry out to be delivered,
That we learn that death is not to be feared, that it is not an enemy,
But rather a friend, an ally, a passageway---- an unlocked door,
One that must be opened in order for us to go back home.
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5882354
Weighted score: 3.7565217
Overall Rank: 13520
Posted: May 23, 2003 12:14 PM PDT; Last modified: May 23, 2003 12:14 PM PDT
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