Re: Severe Acute Respiratory Syndrome by Stephen Robins	17-Apr-03/4:05 AM
in other words, ah-ah-achoooo!
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Apr-03/4:10 AM
what effect does your gamma ray machine have on man-in-the-moon marigolds?
Re: Dance With Me by marvelis	20-Apr-03/12:20 PM
I am not fond of peotry about one's mother. I give you a 4.
Re: Mississipi Murder by scitz	20-Apr-03/12:22 PM
"sheeps"? And if you can't spell "Mississippi", then by all means use "MS". I give you a 6 because I'm a Gene Hackman fan.
regarding some deleted poem...	20-Apr-03/12:25 PM
a magical journey through despair. you get an 8.
Re: Keanu Vs The mystery of life by Shardik	20-Apr-03/12:26 PM
Timely in this year of Matrix films.
Re: A Dream of Dragons by JohnnyW	20-Apr-03/12:33 PM
banal and pedantic. you get a 2.
Re: Letters by discordia	20-Apr-03/12:59 PM
the death rattle of a stalker.
regarding some deleted poem...	20-Apr-03/1:01 PM
when you capitalize "Rock", are you talking about the wrestler?
Re: Summer by MaliqaTara	20-Apr-03/1:04 PM
maybe if you swallowed something other than your pain he would still be around. I give you a 4.
Re: i will not come to bangladesh by lost in america	20-Apr-03/1:06 PM
Not as sexy as the title would suggest - oh, I thought it said come ON Bangladesh. Sorry . You get an 8.
Re: The Nude by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	21-Apr-03/11:02 AM
this should be on the top 15 list, not the bottom 15. at the same time it is truly awful. i give you a 5
Re: the real 2 by bxjay170	24-Apr-03/5:26 AM
wretched. since that's the point, i give you an 8. well done
Re: Staying Sane by ThoughtfulSoul	24-Apr-03/5:29 AM
vulgar and lazy.
Re: no more by wordho	24-Apr-03/5:31 AM
good for you
Re: Theology by dougsoderstrom	25-May-03/1:37 PM
this is a great poem - not! I suspect you are writing bad poems on purpose to receive recognition, of a sort, on the bottom 15. you get a ten.
Re: Final Comment by dougsoderstrom	28-May-03/12:47 AM
That's it, blame the critics for your own failings. This screed sounds like Richard Nixon in '62 when he lost the Governor's race. "You won't have Dougie Soderstrom to kick around anymore!" Like Nixon, you too I fear shall return.
Re: Symbol Of Love by simone_girard	7-Jun-03/5:14 AM
babies should sleep on their backs, freeing you up to write about something else equally depressing. you get a five.
Re: My girl by simone_girard	7-Jun-03/5:20 AM
I can't wait to read the published version in the next issue of "Poems Written By and For Retards Monthly". Seriously, this is execrable. It sounds like it was written by a pioneer lady on the Oregon Trail who had her child kidnapped by an Apache war party. You get a four and you're lucky to get that.
Re: Love by simone_girard	14-Jul-03/11:38 AM
From the Ma Joad tradition of poetry. The cliches, similarity to your other poems, misuse of "your", and reluctance to respect God by capitalizing his name add up to a big honking 1.