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Keanu Vs The mystery of life (Haiku) by Shardik Can I fly? Dude, way.
First Bill & Ted, now Dog Star.
Fetch me a Snapple.
Of all the dumb luck.
My friend, you set new standards.
Who's your agent?
Up the ladder:
The Crutchling
Down the ladder:
Foresight
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 5.736842
Posted: March 7, 2003 11:51 AM PST; Last modified: May 23, 2003 9:54 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.7018967 Overall Rank: 1948 Comments:
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<~> @ 167.206.181.179
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7-Mar-03/1:53 PM
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spin it.
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Shardik @ 24.126.113.154
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7-Mar-03/2:09 PM
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ohh..spin it.?
you can do better, though.
i was being funny, but give me an example.
Pretty pointless and off the mark for a haiku. Sorry.
I said you were a good poet. Don't confuse that with you actually knowing what in the fuck you are talking about. You aren't that good friend by a long shot. Sorry, but fact.
You said I was a good poet? You just called me a fuck face.
Yeah. I know. Life is weird like that friend. You are a good poet, but you suck at critiquing. No offense fuck face? cheers.
I think any critique I give is only an opinion, which is my own and I do believe I have a right to that regardless.
You see writing poetry and reading poetry are quite different. One can not read all poetry from the mind of a poet. It makes you seem starchy, and personally that is something that i consider beneath me, and a bit tiresome and unimaginative. Which funnily enough was what you tried to add to your poetry and failed. like dark angel said in his comment. read that comment again closely, and you will find why i concure.
Okay, quickdraw, you are right. I will go back and try to add depth that is not beneath you.
Oh Shardik... You trap baiter you.
Must your mind live at the Cirkle K Try Chapstick from my ass You know? I just love Oprah. Want a Chocodile?
whoa...
You are an excellent poet!
You aren't!
Timely in this year of Matrix films.
HOW DOES THIS GET TO THE FRONT OF THE QUEUE OF "MOST RECENT POEMS" ON 21 MAY 2003 WHEN IT WAS WRITTEN ND POSTED ON 7 MARCH 2003? IT'S BEYOND COMPREHENSION
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The question before you is, do you rate the poem high or low? Zero or Ten? The thing of it is, though: the choice has already been made for you. You just have to understand WHY you will make that choice.
In conclusion, Monica Belucci has nice cleavage and I TOOK THE PURPLE PILL! Sincerely, Mr. Anderson
Read Soderstrom's new poem-----It's great!
Read my new poem ("Doug Soderstrom")----it's a WINNER!
Keanu cracks me up... ^_^
Be sure to read my latest poem - Theology - It's amazing!!
Interesting indeed.
oh god no no no no. This is truly the width of a circle right here.
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