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Foresight (Free verse) by ifni
like a tragedy,
you smiled at me-
I saw the pain coming
and couldn't
bear
to miss it-
that sweet lash of desire,
the icy fire of denial;
the
cruel twist to your mouth
as you turned, so slowly,
away.
9-9-01 JV
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Overall Rank: 1949
Posted: March 16, 2002 1:15 AM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2002 1:15 AM PST
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