poemranker ::Foresight by ifni

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Free verse № 185

Foresight

Member since 2001 · Posted 16 Mar 2002 · 0 comments

like a tragedy, you smiled at me- I saw the pain coming and couldn't bear to miss it- that sweet lash of desire, the icy fire of denial; the cruel twist to your mouth as you turned, so slowly, away. 9-9-01 JV

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