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Foresight (Free verse) by ifni
like a tragedy, you smiled at me- I saw the pain coming and couldn't bear to miss it- that sweet lash of desire, the icy fire of denial; the cruel twist to your mouth as you turned, so slowly, away. 9-9-01 JV

Down the ladder: The Second World

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.714286
Weighted score: 5.7014384
Overall Rank: 1949
Posted: March 16, 2002 1:15 AM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2002 1:15 AM PST
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