| Re: Agent Orange by Fear of Garbage |
25-Feb-03/6:45 PM |
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| Re: Goodbye Daddy by NewbieMe |
22-Feb-03/9:14 AM |
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Hmmm... I like the way this sorta moves you but the language seems just a little forced. -8-
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| Re: Small Teeth in a Glass Bowl by Fear of Garbage |
17-Feb-03/7:40 AM |
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| Re: Ballet by famenglory |
22-Feb-03/2:58 PM |
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Hmmm. I'm sleeping third row center right behind the old lady with the bad perm. -7-
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| Re: ALONE by NewbieMe |
22-Feb-03/9:19 AM |
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Nice subject matter and I like the way you question yourself. I really think that you worked to hard to confine your thoughts to your 4 line stanza. Let those thoughts run free.
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| Re: Atonement by aperfecttool77 |
17-Feb-03/7:33 AM |
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Wow... I thought that I'd never agree with D.A. but please do shut up.
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| Re: At A Loss by NewbieMe |
22-Feb-03/9:30 AM |
Been there it sux.
LIFE GETS BETTER AWARDE -10-
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| Re: THE POEMRANKER SEXCHART VERSION 1.2 FINAL by TanHand |
22-Feb-03/3:14 PM |
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Wow I didn't know that I was so well known on this site to be included in something like this. I'm touched even though you have me connected with D.A. and I'm not a gay. -10-
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| Re: Sharks For Libido by scitz |
17-Feb-03/11:07 AM |
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Okay don't look it up. Whatever flips your pancake.
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| Re: Sharks For Libido by scitz |
16-Feb-03/10:41 AM |
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According to dictionary.com you misspelled your second word in line 2.
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| Re: My Mind by Deb_djb3113 |
16-Feb-03/10:43 AM |
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I feel like I've read this before
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| Re: Perversions 5: Kink vs. Mothra by razorgrin |
19-Feb-03/3:06 PM |
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| Re: Perversions 6: Judgement Day by razorgrin |
19-Feb-03/3:05 PM |
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Smiley I Love You. These perversions always brighten my day. They're funny as usual.
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| Re: My Poor Heart by NewbieMe |
21-Feb-03/2:21 PM |
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Dull kiddo. Try a whole new aproach to your writing style. You need some depth.
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| Re: Everyday Implied But Never Declared by NewbieMe |
22-Feb-03/9:45 AM |
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Sad but I see this scenario played out everyday.
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| Re: Are You? by NewbieMe |
22-Feb-03/9:42 AM |
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You write well considering this isn't your native Language. Now onto this poem, It lacks any real emotion. Its just the thoughts that go with suicide. The human thought process is better left in a classroom or a debate forum.
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| Re: Senses I Have by NewbieMe |
22-Feb-03/9:28 AM |
Truth be told we only see what we want to see
Tounges lie with ease
Your ears are like our eyes
If you gave your heart fully then when it broke you'd die
Still to be fair not a bad poem -6-
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| Re: From Don ... For Me by NewbieMe |
22-Feb-03/9:37 AM |
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Too incomplete. Expand on what your saying.
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| Re: Have You Ever Felt That? by NewbieMe |
22-Feb-03/9:43 AM |
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| Re: REALITY by NewbieMe |
22-Feb-03/9:34 AM |
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Needs more content but this would be a LIFE GETS BETTER AWARDE if I hadn't all ready given you one today. Trust me girlfriends come and go but the poems you write about them will haunt us forever. -8-
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