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My Poor Heart

by NewbieMe

Member since 2002 · Posted 21 Feb 2003 · 6 comments

How many times must you love someone not worthy? How many times must you suffer and bleed? How many times must you sacrifice yourself for someone? How many times must you endure this? What is it with you and pain? What is it with you and hurt? What is it with you and longing? What is it with you and hope? Why must you ignore the signs Why must you look past the truth Why must you tolerate the pain? Why must you keep going on? When will you accept all this? When will you stop and think? When will you think and act? When will you learn from this?

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[4] spank me baby yeah 21-Feb-03/9:10 AM Reply
boring, wake me when your better.
I suck too
[n/a] NewbieMe › spank me baby yeah 21-Feb-03/4:18 PM Reply
hehe. it's nice to know that others suck as well. thanks
[1] thepinkbunnyofdoom 21-Feb-03/2:21 PM Reply
Dull kiddo. Try a whole new aproach to your writing style. You need some depth.
[n/a] NewbieMe › thepinkbunnyofdoom 21-Feb-03/4:20 PM Reply
oh thanks, i do believe i really need depth. this is one of those impulse writing, just writing not thinking much. :)
[1] thepinkbunnyofdoom › NewbieMe 21-Feb-03/5:03 PM Reply
Hey don't worry about it. Just giving you some insight for next time.Trust me we all start out sucky but the goal is to get better. ;)
[n/a] NewbieMe › thepinkbunnyofdoom 21-Feb-03/9:45 PM Reply
oh, that's nice of you to say. i went to look at one of ur poems, you got a lot of angst against yer ex-gf but i kinda understand why. very vivid tho the way you express LoL. will read more of your poems when i'm free. on another note, care to read my other poems? i promise i won't get mad w/ ur criticism. good or bad comments are appreciated ;)